Fabulous Finishes

I recently watched Maleficent and I loved it BUT…there was a period during the movie where I grew worried, panicked, actually…when I heard, “The princess can be woken from her death sleep, but only by…true love’s kiss. This curse will last till the end of time! No power on Earth can change it!”


I heard, “True Love’s kiss” and all I could think was , Oh no, here we go again. – another Snow White, Sleeping Beauty, and Enchanted movie that ends with the prince saving the princess with (yet another) true love’s kiss. Of course, that’s not how it ends (sorry, if I spoiled that for you). Disney, is smarter than that, creating an unexpected ending that redefines (their) typical true love and I applaud them for it.

As writers, we owe our readers that as well, a magical, unexpected ending….An ending that makes the reader say wow! Whether it’s a heartfelt wow, a giggly wow or a surprising wow – a wow, just the same.


I love when I find a picture book with a fabulous finish, a brilliant ending. I recently read

ate my dog


This book just ate my dog!

by Richard Byrne


Not only is the story fresh and fun but the ending is clever and funny.

When the Bella who is taking a stroll with her dog loses him to the crease in the book, she declares,“This book just ate my dog!” which is hilarious and then she loses friends and help to the book and soon Bella disappears as well. But then a note appears to help the reader get them all out of the book. After a bit of turning, shaking and wiggling (interactive fun) the characters reappear, “…and things got back to normal.”

If the book had ended there it still would have been a great read – clever, fun, fresh and engaging, but it doesn’t end there. It ends well…unexpectedly.